version: 0.2.4 - Changelog:
INTERACTIVE VISUAL NOVEL.
- ADULT CONTENT.
- WORK IN PROGRESS: 40% FINISHED(only in sketches, no color yet).
- WICCA ELEMENTS.
Your roommate and best friend tries to rape [b]Neus[/b], the most introverted of the whole design school, who bites him just after you save her.
You discover that bite was not only for self-defense, it also contains a bewitching that [b]turns your roomate step by step into a girl[/b].
Who everyday that pases, she seem forgeting more his past and becoming more attracted to you.
To save your friend, you make a pact wit Neus to have 4 dates, and the last night she promises to return his original male form to your buddy.
Although it seems that she keeps her word, there are sinister things she had not told you yet.
Neus (The Cutie Witch)
Dídac (Sporty Roomate)
Dídac (more femenine...)
You (This name is your choice)
This is really good.
The art is endearing and sexy.
The story is a little predictable so far, but very good.
You also have a gift for dialogue that doesn't feel stilted or unnatural. That was my favorite part of the game.
Keep it up.
Great work up to date.
Most of the reviews already explored almost anything I would like to add.
The only thing left is this: In most tg games transformed person too quickly becomes submissive. For this part, as an idea you could make Didac a little bit more of a tease - that would add interesting flavour to the game.
Still - the best concept out of all I`ve seen on this site.
Unfortunately i can only comment on the english side of things, but i'll start entirely on that. I would personally prefer a localization than a straight translation, unless the locale becomes a more important feature as things progress. As it is now, the names are slightly difficult for me to connect with, and the referrence to a television program was entirely lost on me. Similarly, i don't get the big deal with her housing, so an explanation would be nice.
Moving on, the art was enjoyable and fitting, a big plus in something like this.
Gameplay wise, while i appreciated the +/- feedback, it would be nice if certain acts and actions opened or closed of various responses later, even if they don't meaningfully alter the story.
As for said story, I'm into it. It's a different perspective than i'm used to seeing, which is enjoyable. I do wish i could be FAR harsher on the friend, sure he's your roommate, but he can fuck right off. I'd love an option to force him to deal with whatever is going on by himself, until he becomes desperate enough to come crawling to you for help with his "issue".
At first I thought the protagonist will be the one who changes, but even if it's not, this game has a great potential, I really enjoyed playing throught the existing content.
It made me think whether the game finishes after the 3 date, or there will be a little more content after the dates.. I really don't know, but one thing is for sure, if you ever make another game, maybe even similar to this, I will be on lookout for it.
Very nice done. One of my fave now.