You play as John, a nerdy 18 year old iin his senior year, forced to tutor a superficial cheerleader.
Sexy antics ensue when you discover a board game with magical powers.
Play in Browser is Working, Yay!!!
Sorry for hostilities before, just been taking a lot of crap in RL and was reading through forums and saw other authors being attacked and, well, I shouldn't have jumped the gun, I'm sorry, please enjoy the game, I'll try to update asap, but may be another week or even a fortnight before an update
Okay went over the passages with a spell checker, btw for those who never used twine, it's not gotta le spell checker, you gotta like cut and paste the words from the a passages and put them into like word or in my case Open Office, and then spella checka the wordski's and then lika copya and pasta thems back inna to the Twine! Understanderooni? No, oh well.
Now spell check is very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, veeeeerrrrrryyyy, different to grammar/logic/content check, spell check, amzingly fixes the spelling errors, the grammar/logic/content check comes later, and it means I gotta read through the whooooooole story, and so I do it last, so yeah, some parts are a bit badly written, I do my best but sometiems I just write so darn fast I don't say it how I want it to be protrayed, sometiems I go itno too much detail or not enough, anyway that will coem later, for now, it is spello checkered at least.
V2.1 The point 1 means it's Spell checked.
To dhccpmc: (Whispers) That's why it's called an Alpha/Demo... Just saying.
Quite a few of the links take me to pages that can't be found on the server.
I enjoyed the game. The changes and the character interaction are engagine.
I hope there will be updates :)
Really enjoyed this game. One of the best i have tried on here (a clear 3 in my top 5)
I enjoyed the start of this game - and can not wait to see how much it will improve and grow.
Yes there are some spelling mistakes, and grammer errors - but.... hey that happens and they can be clean up after the fact with good editing and help (after all this is free!)
I am sorry to hear you have decided to leave out the random elements but then again game creation isn't easy. But if you ever want to try I think they would be a happy addition for replayablity.
I hope to see this updated more... I think it is a fun Alpha release, and good story to follow.
An interesting idea somewhere in this, I suppose... I had troubles going down many paths with errors and such.
Also, I would like to remind the 'creator' that reviews are what they are... reviews of what content is made accessible... and that personally ''attacking''(choose the word you prefer) reviewers isn't proper OR conducting of a better experience for anyone.