A young stud gets what he deserves after broking a girl's heart.
DISCLAIMER : english is not my mother tongue so expect grammar errors and not so detailed paragraphs.
However if you want to add details or ideas to the story or even rewrite bits of it, you are most welcome.
This game will mostly contain ORAL SEX as sex scenes, be warned.
Version 0.0.4 : More fixes and grammar, a bit of content again, in preparation for a big content update !
Version 0.0.3 : Mostly fixes, a bit of content and better pacing ( I hope ! )
Version 0.0.2 : Minor changes, fixes, UI stuff and a small branch added for people who like non-instant ( still fast though ) TF.
Has potential, but at this early stage of development I'm more curious about the future decision pathways your avatar can be effected by after the introduction.
Writing is acceptable, code looks stable and I found no bugs in my multiple playthroughs to the endpoint of the current content. Transformations are limited right now, but allowed for quite broadly in the code and the status tracker is useful for keeping an eye on your more risky decisions and their effect to your avatar.
But there is still more to come and the current level of this release prevents me from doing too indepth of a review.
Cautiously recommended, but I need to see future releases to better understand how far this interactive story is going to go between light hearted and dark punishment torture.
One of my favorite games around here. Hope to see more of it :). 4/5 (it's pretty short)
Definitely a good game already. There isn't much yet, but I can definitely tell it will be a good one once it has more progress. Give it a try, you won't regret it.
Decent start, could be very good. I like that most of the sex content so far is oral
For a first release, there's an ok amount of content. More than many initial releases, less than I would have liked.
The writing is good and I enjoyed the premise of the story. I posted a bit of constructive criticism over in the game thread in the thread there, but I can honestly say that I was plesantly surprised by this little gem of a game. With just a little work, it could become a truly exceptional game.
Great start, and I'm very much looking forward to updates to this one!