You have a bad day at work and decide to get away from it all for a week in a mountain cabin. However, an early snowstorm coupled with a weird tingling sensation soon changes those plans. You are stuck in the snow and have to figure out what to do about it. The overall theme will be survival in extreme environments, while being t/f'd, and having some fun along the way.
(Very) loosely inspired by The Long Dark. I love that game, and this will obviously be nowhere near that complex, but it is the inspiration for the theme.
Latest update: Started the daily survival cycle. More activities/options required, but the basics are there.
The main character has a bad day at work and decides to get away from it all for a week in a mountain cabin. However, an early snowstorm coupled with a weird tingling sensation soon changes those plans.
Intro: Jennifer the intern, co-worker and boss.
After: Ken and Sam (so far).
The writing leaves much to be desired in some places. Sometimes it's brief and just expects you to accept the situation. Other times it's detailed and descriptive, but this is usually only during sexy scenes. Anything else is either too straightforward or vauge.
So far so good the writing is solid from what I can tell and the intro has me interested. I how you will keep working on this.
Very nice start and great writing! Can't wait to see where it goes
Very good for begining. Waiting for more.
An interesting introduction, I'm excited to see where you go with it.