Meeting Rachel

Author: Joe Schmo
Version: 1.0
Last Updated: 2017-01-28 15:39:01


Review by bsharp
Version reviewed: 1.0 on 2017-01-29 22:00:10

Excellent writing...very hot!  The dice game is fun too.  Can't wait to see more.


Review by Zer0zero
Version reviewed: 0.99 on 2017-01-22 02:48:31

Fucking perfect... do not stop the story!! Keep it going!!!!


Review by sissy_dani
Version reviewed: 0.99 on 2017-01-15 00:04:32

Fun little game/story. Love the dice mechanic, looking forward to either more of this story or other games building on the mechanics here.


Review by sathirran
Version reviewed: 0.50 on 2017-01-09 19:00:38

I like the writing and the exploration of the XChange source material. The dice mechanics are also very interesting. However, so far there isn't much to the game, and winning or losing doesn't seem to have any effect aside from uncovering traits (which don't seem to do anything yet).

Looking forward to future updates


Review by Ragequit
Version reviewed: 0.50 on 2017-01-09 12:39:13

Really good start. A fun concept, the dice system is interesting and may make a lot of sense in a lot of games. Fun and innovative, easy to understand with a good tutorial. I like it.

 

I also really liked the writing. Descriptions are on point, and I feel like the character is eased into his transformation as the writing describes the situations and atmosphere really well. I usually skim through a lot of textwalls but this one is definitely worth reading.

 

The only missing thing are pics, as I like them a lot, but that's a personal preference. The very good descriptions kinda make up for it, I would enjoy it even more with some POV pics or gifs.

 

Looking forward to updates.