i know the game is complete, but there is a certain huge lacklustre feeling in the descriptive writing when 'her/your sex' is used to refer to a groin most of the time. its a major turnoff.
Well written, could focus slightly more on the fact that the characters are not human, as far as writing goes the only difference is that men are called stallions and women are called mares.
the game is heavily stacked against the player, and it would be nice to be able to win the contest. in its current form you either become a mare or the arena is attacked.
I would like to see the game expanded more so that a win over another male makes you more manly and a loss would not be an instant game over. (maybe 2 losses then game over?)
well written for the most part, but I feel like the stallion part could have been better described, as I noticed a minor lack of the fine details for the mares and stallions, I don't remember a mention of fur, horse flare, and only can remember one time a tail is mentioned.
still a great bit of fun, but for a furry like me, it's a bit spare on the details I would expect.
ummm horny mare slut.. again and again and.. ummm.....
another nice lily game
only disapointment is i wanst turned into a wolf but besides that wonderfull
It is Lily's game so I think that is enough said. This short AIF goes along the line of hot sex, in the name of horseman, or horse man. A nice erotic piece to read.