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Some spelling and grammar mistakes.
Writing is alright. Main and supporting characters have some depth to them with a bit of backstory that you'll find depending on your stats.
Multiple branching pathways with your initial choices having a big impact on what's available.
Overall quite good. Still need to look at code.
There seems to be a problem after the transformation (after you view yourself the first time):
[["That would be great, thanks.|Deck]]
No link exist....
This is good, pictures fit with whats going on and the dialog is spot on. If the author does not continue the story it would be crime to all of humanity. 10/10
I really enjoyed the game. It flows nicely from scene to scene and the pace is great. There are a metric ton of typos and ill-chosen sentences and the one sex scene could be a little hotter since you're obviously not shy, but hey - its still pretty great.
well done and I hope updates are coming soon!
Really great start. Looking forward to some updates.
hay mate just some advice you may want to add another link for download because a lot of people are a bit leary about using 4sheard because of all the malwere
It is rare to get me to review anything let alone post a comment, but I must say an excellent start and great choices for the pictures. The writing flows smoothly and the story draws you in, the only bad thing I can say that the game ends too soon!
I really like how the game is so far cant wait for future updates !