All feedback is welcome, this is my first game, and I hope to learn a lot from it!
This game follows a young man as he lives his life, planning on finishing the story after entering college.
This game is more of a cyoa type linear story game, more to tell a story than anything else as I try to figure out the more complex ways to use twine and hopefully bring better games in the future.
Also not sure how to make this playable in browser so I just linked it to MEGA.
Please feel free to join us in the discussion area, I'd love to hear your questions and opinions!
Update 0.4.0 (2/14/2017)
Hey guys. Its looking like things are starting to pick up for me personally so I'm trying to finish the story up ASAP. Then I'll finish adding in pictures and proofread/make any edits.
I wasn't sure I uploaded this version. It's taking a while more than I would have liked, working a little bit on it when I can.
I've been busier than expected but I still don't see the me taking longer than a few weeks to finish! Sorry for the delay
Hopefully you guys have had a good time with this, I enjoyed making it.
I've finished the storyline for choosing to be a guy (except a submissive gay scene). It's not my best work but I figure a meh ending is better than no ending. Also I haven't gone through and proofread it so there may be spelling/grammer errors etc.
It's great reading your feedback, it really feels good to read the good things that you guys have to say, thank you for that!
It's a great game, and I'd love to see more of it.
...is something that I might conceivably say if there were a way to play this game. As it stands, I'm left sitting here with a "Play Now" link that doesn't let me play the game now, but instead takes me to a completely different site to download the game. It might be excusable if that download was not broken. So, I really have no clue what the content of this game is like. Take from all this what you will, but I don't think it's a good sign.
Really like it so far, great job. You should probably change Dr. Chase's text colour though, because right now it clashes a lot with the background which makes it irritating to read.
It's more of a story than a game. the story itself is not up to my liking but there in this site you will find a lot who like it.(not realy fan of M/M ) incest warning even before playing is a must.
Nice to have color coded text but without Reader View suport i will be damned to read long text walls with small font.
Hey, great start with this one.
It remindes me of Coleman Institute/Enrollin in Coleman by herrzimm. I like how you've given the player some customization to the MC and the content. I also like how you've given an explination to why everyone in the MC's life is so sexually aggresive to him/her. Hope to see more soon.
Ps, like how quick updates are coming out.
Makes no sense. One of the options has you choosing the girl and bully both coming over and you make your choice, if you choose the bully the girl leaves angrily yet still you end up going out with the girl despite choosing him over her?
The writing however, is pretty good and I look forward to reading more.