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English
Release Date
03/25/2017
Last Update
12/08/2017
Version
0.8 (patreon)
Development
Alpha
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164
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Female
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Version: 0.7.6 (Public)


A new dawn

ONLINE VERSION IS NOT UPDATED TO THE LATEST PUBLIC VERSION YET!

This is my second try on making a game from the rpg maker editors. All feedback is welcome!  

The game follows a young virgin, a daughter of a powerfull duke. The land gets invaded and the family gets split. Your task is to find a way to reunite with your family.

I'm now hosting the game online!

play it at https://patreonwhiteraven.com/public


What I want to focus on:
Slowly transforming the protagonists mind from example a prude royal lady to a common whore, or you could try to stay prude and have your mind affected in another way.
More ways to complete missions, if you get a mission you don't have to complete it the way it should. You could find another way to do it. Like throw away or sell the item, but then you'll mind gets affected in the process.
A smart way to express all the relevant aspects of the characters mind in conversations and scenes.
Many alternate routes.
No fights ever! Too annoying!
More bad endings, I want to give you freedom but at a cost. Some actions might lead to bad ends.

The game will focus on mind transformation, pure/whore. I've think it would be cool that Victoria(protagonist) dreams of a situation she've been in and then is affected by the dream. For example she showes her breast to have a place to stay and then she dreams of having her boobs molested and every night will push the dream further and further untill she'll starting to day dream or let people have their way with her easier.

I also thinks that she can dream of different things. That there's some treshold that can be passed for example: Victoria shows her boobs three times or more and then she starts dreaming of that or she seen some street whore perform a blowjob 3 times and then starts dreaming of that. Then the mind transformation process starts and if more than one treshold is passed she'll dream of a random topic that's triggered. 

The game will also have mind transformation of evil and good and have already some evil/good events built in. But is not gathering points for them yet. For example if you're going to feed the hen their forage, instead of feading them you can go to the shop and sell the forage there giving you more silver for one work. In future updates this will give you evil points. And good points will be like, thell nice things to people who's sad, or help them doing things for free.

CHANGELOG

Bugfix version 0.8.3
+ Fixed blake dream variable didn't get the right value once all dreams was done. This made some people only dream about blake since it was the only dream that wasn't done yet
+ Fixed dance dream was set to be done before the dream was actually done giving the dream sequence lower priority making it harder to get the last dream
+ Put the inn keeper and the dancing bunny back, removed them accidently when I changed the corruption points for the gang bang scene
+ Fixed a variable that didn't reset properly for blake friend event to trigger
- Removed the plugin LeAutoPushNPC was creating a bug if you tried to push events that isn't defined

+ Changed direction from shop said north when it's actually south
+ Changed the animation fade out and fade in screens to override pictures so that you don't experience the annoying blinking pictures
+ Fixed blake scenes bugs, picture freeze and walking error.
+ Fixed game freeze when enter the inn
+ Fixed showed wrong sized boobs at the cumshot of blake scene
+ Changed corruption points when viewing the gang bang scene first night from -20 to -10 if you steal her coins.
+ Added an option to give no HP and MP cost to the cheat skull (Use with caution I'm not sure the game will fix this option tested once and worked for me but can't guarantee it will work)
+ Fixed if you run out from the jerk house you could not stay at the old man or at the jerk
Stage part wrong name

+ Fixed flashing tits to town people, now you can only flash two towns people a day.
+ Fixed transparent player after GH scene.
+ Fixed the rollback variables on the second mission (The orcs are invisible but the mission is still playable)
+ Fixed the dream black screen
+ Fixed the status image won't go away after visit the new house without blake.
+ Added the corruption variable value to the mirror

 

Version 0.8
Scenes
+ A new scene with Blake (8 animations, 16 if you count the BE animations)
+ A new scene with Blake second time different dialogs (8 animations, 16 if you count the BE animations)
+ A new scene with Blake third time different dialogs can lead to bad end (8 animations, 16 if you count the BE animations)
+ A new scene (Using 2 of the new animations CG's 4 if you count the BE animations)
+ A new scene (Using 2 of the new animations CG's 4 if you count the BE animations)
+ A new scene with a new character (8 animations)
+ A new scene with a new character BE part with different animations and conversation (8 animations)
+ A new scene (Glory hole while addicted to cum)
Dreams
+ A new dream (Blake)
+ A new dream (Blake)
+ A new dream (Blake)
+ A new dream (Blake)
Other
+ 1071 images from Martiandawn that creates 32 different longer animations (16 with BE and 16 without BE)
(Total of 48 different animations in the game, 24 with BE and 24 without BE)
+ Additional 57 new CG's in the game (Around 1900 CG's in the game).
+ A new dance request with some CG's and some more thoughts from Victoria as she dances for the men in the pub
+ A new mission from Sarah (starts after you've seen the new dialogs from the brothel and finished the second mission) [Un finished]
+ Changed an old mission different outcome if you don't follow order
+ Added a smaller side mission for different outcome of the mission above (Leads to the new scene with the new character)
+ Additional 10 new face images
+ A new map (Near the orc camp)
+ A new map (In the town)
+ Changed Blakes face image
+ Changed the dream algorithm made it less messy and shorter.
+ Added a rollback button if you want to play an old save but still want to test the reworked mission.
Bugfix

 

Version 0.7 (public)
Scenes
+ New scene with black patron (Includes 8 different Animations)
+ Added a variation of scene with black patron (variation of the scene above)
+ Added a variation of scene with black patron (repeatable)
+ Added a variation dialogs on previus black patron scene
+ Added a variation dialogs on the goblin scenes at the shore
Dreams
+ A new dream(dance)
+ A new dream(dance)
+ A new dream(Glory hole)
+ A new dream(Glory hole)
Other
+ A new costume(You can get it from see enough dance dreams)
+ A new costume(You can get it from the cleaning lady)
+ Added a new dance job with the new costume
+ Added a new dialogs and work for the new wench outfit
+ Added a new mission with two different outcomes
+ Added some conversation with the purpose to explain the situation in the world
+ After you've seen all scenes with the black patron you can chose which scene you'd like to play
+ 308 images from Martiandawn that creates 16 different animations (8 with BE and 8 without BE)
+ Additional 60 new CG's in the game (Around 790 CG's in the game).
+ Additional 8 new face CG's
+ Added mirrors, they show your current state such as virginity, corruption and current level of cum addiction
+ Added dialogs in the brothel
+ Added cheat skull for patreons
+ Added a algorithm for not seing dreams who's done, ex: if you've seen all dance dreams there's only 10% chance
to see it until you've seen every dream then it's 33% again
+ Fixed a bunch of grammar typos and spellings reported by OhioOkie
+ Fixed a bunch of grammar typos and spellings reported by ADIDAS from TFGamesite.com
+ Added names to people in the town
+ Added a variation on the dance event (BE dancing)
+ Changed the dialog at the pub dancer and tavern wench suggested by OhioOkie
+ Added a new dialog after working longer in the tavern (nickname and other stuff)
+ Changed dialog with cleaning lady and added some that goes with the progression in the tavern work
+ Changed dialog with black patron suggested by OhioOkie
+ Changed the flour quest start, after the old man have told you once you don't need to hear it once again...
+ Created a system for cum addiction with two variables cum cravings and cum drinked.
The level of cum craving depends on how far your cum addiction variable have gone.
Cum drinked does also depends on which kind of cum you drink, goblin cum have very high points!
Bugfix
+ Removed the bunny dance event when the bunny where not dancing
+ Fixed a bug, drinking one jar with goblin cum removed two

+ Fixed dance variable not reseting properly
+ Fixed Blake scene going off even though it was not supposed to
+ Fixed ask for sarah even when she's back
+ Fixed stop dancing giving you twice your sallary
+ Fixed endless loop with the black man scene
+ Fixed couldn't talk to bar maid after nickname was chosen
+ Fixed Sarah moving after mission 2 done
+ Grammars and typos reported by Kelia
+ Fixed image not going away after the new black scene
+ Fixed the animations didn't show up
+ Fixed Sarah image not going away

Bugfix 0.7.6

+ Fixed a bug if you've only activated dance dream and jerk dream you could only dream of dancing.
+ Changed the jerk cum addiction event to only occur if you're actually craving cum.
+ Changed the cum addiction level system so it work as it should.
+ Changed if you're craving cum you wont dream of anything right after the blowjob scene.
+ Changed energy cost removes as you accept to comb the horses
+ Fixed patrons asking for three beers not two at the pub
+ Fixed could only warn the girls from the innkeeper if you stay at the old mans house
+ Added the last BE images for the dance event
+ Fixed the GH dream
+ Fixed could work washing lady even after you've declared earnings
+ Fixed a typo reported by OhioOkie


Latest Reviews - View All Reviews

Review by enthrallingechoes

Version reviewed: 0.7.6 (Public) on 12/07/2017


It's a decent game with oh sooo much potential; although, there are some significant drawbacks: 

1) Progression is unclear. Progression is tied to your dreams advancing "paths" is however it's not really clear how to reap certain rewards.((**SPOILERS*** For example if one reads the description in the changelog, it says one will unlock the bunnygirl costume by seeing enough dancing dreams. I've seen every dream on repeat over and over for the bunnygirl including tier with the bunnygirl MC and the inkeeper. And I still can't unlock a the bunnygirl costume, I've danced more times than I can count too to the point I've put in over 5hrs(ona single save) and still unable to get the costume despite seeing the same dancing dream over and over. **SPOILERS**))

2) Progression is partitioned. While I'm usually a fan of alternate paths and choices with consequences, the paths in here are not strong enough or seperate them out. ((**SPOILERS*** The Jerk and Inkeeper houses grant you different dreams with differing storylines, neither storyline is particularly strong because the Inkeeper makes his way to the bar and you will have dreams about him. Why is if I stay with the Jerk, I can't have other dream's about the inkeeper or go back into the Inn after the MC has fantazied about him in order view the Inn related content. Why is if you stay in the Inn your locked out of breast enhancement. Yet strange things happen like dreaming about a gloryhole when I purposefully avoided the gloryhole on a playthrough, yet I can't dream about the inkeeper. I never visited the gloryhole These diverging paths do nothing the fracture a story that needs work.  **SPOILERS**))

3) The Writing - The game is LOADED with typo's the author of the game really needs to pay to have someone review his writing for spelling and grammar. Also it might help to have some craft some more immersive writing as the story moves forwared. For example, As the game progresses and your character becomes a "slut" she still says many things from when she was "innocent" like I hate certain comments I'm not a slut etc, which considering clash horribly with a fully corrupted character. Things like that make the game a rather unimmersive experience and does little  advance corruption theme which this game centers around. Get a writer to make the corruption really feel palpable add in more dialogue to show the MC's mindset and response change to repeatable events. The author is way to reliant upon renderings to tell story which is a detriment to the story. Getting a writer on the team could help flush out the story and make the game more involving. While renders are nice they aren't always needed

4) Rendering -  The creator if extremely reliant on Poser (or similiar program) to generate 3d renderings to tell the story. There many animated scenes, which can be a positive in this case many of the renders are many of images look like only a few CG's where generated then strung together to create the animatation this makes things extremely unnatural. I'd prefer an option skip through clunky animations as fast as dialogue (which can be skipped instantly) especially after seeing the same clunky animation for the 100th time. If the primary storytelling element is going to be visual rather than textual investing time into creating more realistic animations. 

5) Consider adding in outfit vendors and Transformation vendors or just make accessing said content less clunky than through means more accessible than through unclear dreams or paths the completely barr you from experiencing certain content.

Overall there is a lot of potential to this game and I'm exciting to see what the future holds; however, when creator is earning roughly $1,500 on patreon a month there should be a lot more polish to the writing and animations. The story needs development because there isn't much there the dreams feel like a way of simply timegating you keep you playing long and prevent you from acessing certain content.


Review by PHDIKOULAS

Version reviewed: 0.6.3 on 09/18/2017


Great great great game,lovely story,great characters.A must play

 

My only complaint is that some scenes are tied to what staying house you choose,IF this is corrected we ll be talking about a perfect game

 

 

PS that ork ointment needs to produce bigger tits!!


Review by Umaro

Version reviewed: 0.6 on 09/07/2017


One of the best RPG Maker games on this site. The situations and visuals are very nice and plentiful, and the author also consistently adds a significant amount of content every month. 

Right now the actual story line is still not very deep, but this project shows a lot of promise. 


Review by whiteraven

Version reviewed: 0.5.2 on 08/20/2017


TotallySane

It's fixed now, I'm glad you like it :)

 

 

Kromar

Ok I'll do it now, the bug you encountered is a known bug. I figured that the job at the tavern was broken no one wants to do it therefor I never fix it untill a new job was made. I also did a hotfix where the conversation towards the dancer job which was supposed to enter in version 0.3 entered the game. 

I've fixed this in version 0.3 with a new tavern wench job and dancer job :)


Chicken quest:
You can complete the chicken quest if you sell all the forage at the shop, this will in the future updates affect your mind. If you do this you can allways start the quest the next day in version 0.1 and 0.2. 
 
dd93
The chicken bug is fixed now, I don't remember if I uploaded it in one of my hotfixes for version 0.2 though...
I'm not a fan of rpg makers with fighting too, even though my first game had that... Might be one of the reasons I had a rough time develop it.
The dog have a purpose but not right now though and it seems like it annoyed many people.
The dream sequence is where I want to focus on the transformation aspects in the game. I feel that by letting the player know what kind of dreams that are dreamt he/she will also knows what kind
of affections that's currently affecting you right now. Furthermore I think this will effect the transformation in her mind such that it feels slower than if she knows what she's doing.
Thanks for the feedback!
 
 
obviousagent
 The dancer thing is supposed to be in version 0.3, you have found a unfinished event I had do to some hotfixes the reason it's in version 0.2.
Do you mean that she transforms into a bunny girl or just have a bunny costume?
There'll be BE (breast enlargement) in the game if you like physicall transformations.
I do know that there's some bad renders in the game, it's because I bought new components you can tell the difference between the renders before and after.
I'll re render the bad renders in when I've got time. 
Thanks for the feedback!
EDIT:
Interesting, it wasn't what I had in mind but that can be cool too we'll see what I decide to do.
 
 
Gummirompa
 
I'm only going to add one more town, I've only planned for a town where you meet up with your parents and here depending on your state you can either help them escape or stay captured with them.
Pregnancy means game over, it's in one of the bad ends right now and will also be that in future updates.
I've currently not decided how much you can be affected or how many scenes I'll do in the town before I move on. But the player will spend most of his time there though, so most of the scenes will also appear there.
Effects will carry on to the next town.
I also focus alot on finishing this game, it might sound strange or stupid but that's one of my goals and also the reason I've decided to only have one town to work with and a final state/town to wrap the game up.
Thanks for your feedback!
 
 
JoeW
 
Yes it sounds like you've made it to the end of the current public version. I'll dive right into these bugs you've reported! 
The bar job is very bugged right now and is only a test it's not at the ready state just yet.
I'm going to give the dog a purpose aswell but in later updates.
You wont change you attitude towards the dancer in this update.
There's only two prostitution scenes and they only occur one time.
George house is not in the game yet, will come in future updates.
 
Thanks for your review, it was very good for the game!
 
 
Smut_Peddler
I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy the game, but hey it can't fit everyones desires.
 
 
Abstergo
Thanks for a great review!
Yes I've noticed this aswell and I'm doing my best to keep the paths/workload small, because I'm doing all this alone.
Don't worry about the slave ship, you're going to end up in the same place that you would when you went with the caravan but with a different path and mind state. 
 
Modern life deserves to be finished! I'm going to pick up the thread when this game is done but only focusing on the modern element and making it more like a life simulator platform I think.
 
 
ranker01
Next version is out for my patreon though, will be out for public in a month or so. I'm glad you liked the concept so far!
 

Review by TotallySane

Version reviewed: 0.5.2 on 08/19/2017


I like your game, but I have I have one complaint about the online version.
There's a "Register / Login" banner blocking a tiny part of the screen on the top right.
It covered some dialogue boxes so I finally registered,
but now it just says "TotallySane Public" instead and is still blocking the screen.


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