Hi, gueteva here submitting my second game after a long while.
This is a COMPLETE LINEAR story. Meaning that you have no choice at what will happen for the time being, but that one path is complete and 13000 words long.
This is the story of Kevin, a fat 25 year old cooking school graduate that starts a cupcake shop with his buddy Mike only to find himself transformed into a hot blonde bimbo.
This story is heavily inspired by Booth Babe, Joeforest games, Yes, Mr. Brown and Rad Science.
My idea for this story is to make sure it\'s always finished, so I\'ll do linear stories and add new complete paths with every update turning from linear to CYOA. I might add some pictures in the futures as I might add some variables and game like functions in the future...at the time I just felt like writing a hot story and wrote the way I would have played it if I had been given options.
Hope you like it and make sure to review and like.
This may not be a game as of v.1, but it's a great erotic story. Try it!
There's an interesting enough story here to make a short and sweet CYOA game. Choices like whether or not to lock the door before the health inspector arrives, or whether or not to "make a cupcake" with him, and so forth. It's a shame the potential is squandered on a linear story.
Let's be clear, this does not constitute as a game. There is no mechanic, there is no choice. It's a linear storyline broken up into paragraphs with hyperlinks leading from one paragraph to the next.
The content is entertaining, and if you like reading porn, you'll get a jolly out of what's presented here.
Just, don't expect this to be a game, or anything remotely game-y.
In fact, I'm not even aware of why the author went through so much trouble putting this into an engine, when it really would've been easier to publish this story as a pdf file. It would've been easier for the author's audience to read too.
Just, food for thought.
A "complete, linear story" with a cliffhanger at the end. But it was a fairly long story and the cliffhanger didn't cut off anything that wasn't obviously going to happen, so it ended up being more like "And he/she lived happily ever after" than "To be continued". You also get points for having very few spelling errors.
All in all, it's fine as a work of erotic fiction, but it's so linear that I can't tell where you could even try to branch off this one path to make it a real CYOA.
I hope you'll surprise me.
Although the story is entertaining it feels heavily rushed, as if the author got caught up in their own story and skipped over building up to a climax in the story and just dove right into it. Also the story could use a thorough proof reading with there being instances of the author repeating the same things twice in a sentence or the reader losing comprehension of what exactly the author is describing because of misspellings or sentences making no sense at all. It is a good story but with some proof reading and taking time to flesh out certain events in the story this could become an even better reading experience.
That being said I would give this piece of work a 6 out of 10 at it's current stage and would suggest it to any fans of breasts expansion/ass expansion and overall bimbofication.