It's basically the collar 2 lol don't sue me.
There's a very small amount actually done so don't flip out when you realize it's only like 10 pages of content
I noticed collar was mispelled as colar in one page.
The presmide seems very similar to the Collar but with a few changes so I am interested in where this will go.
Right now there are no choices for the player to make, so the game right now is a few pages of story, setting up the premise of the game.
Thats all I can really critique about the content that is currently available. I'm interested in seeing more.
Seems more like a remake of The Collar so far than a sequel. Grammar is good, pages are rather short. Will be interesting to see where this goes.
There is nothing here yet. No choices, 11 pages of text that are mostly one or two short paragraphs per page.