A game that I wanted to test my capabilities on Twine with. I'm only just doing this to learn, story is there though for anyone interested.
The year is 2077, October.
You and your sister, Anna, gain free entry into Vault 63. Built under the heart of Chicago. The apocalypse is soon upon the world and the vault is sealed. With you and almost 1000 other dwellers.
Vault 63's plan for the continuation of humanity involves a year of basic training for all vault dwellers. Then all must enter hibernation chambers to preserve the minuscule resources the vault has. Two hundred years of hibernation, then the Vault Blast Doors would open, letting the vault dwellers restart society outside.
Well, at least that's what the inhabitants of Vault 63 were made to believe.
You wake up two hundred years later, as intended, but to a seemingly abandoned Vault 63. Where are the inhabitants, why is the Vault abandoned, why were you left behind, where is your sister, and why are you in a body not of your own?
None yet. Theres barely any choices! You don't need a walkthrough.
ok i have played through up to the point where veronica gives you the "jet" (libido) multiple times and no matter what happens after the first group without taking the drug or after finding bruce after taking it the screen goes black and does not allow you to continue further. this game (both .2b and .2c seems to have been given up on. its a shame as up till that point it was a pretty good game.
Damn good game if you didn't hack the computer at the begining of the game you better go back and do it there's some imersive things down here.
I'll paste a copy of a corrupted file I managed to uncorupt with my skills (IRL);
"what the fuck did you just fucking say about me,you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated to pof my class in the NavySeals,and I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire US armed forces.You are nothing to me but just another target.I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words.You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot.The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life.You’re fucking dead,kid. I can be anywhere,anytime,and I can kill you. in over seven hundred ways,and that’s just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat,but I have access to the entire arsenal of the UnitedStatesMarineCorps and I
will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent ,you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever”comment was about to bring down upon you, may be you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn’t,you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead,kiddo.Wwhat the fuck did you just fuckingsay a bout me,you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated to pof my class intheNavySeals,and I ’ve been in volved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda ,and I have over 300 confirmed kills"
And that was in the computer of the creep. That give a title idea of what this game could give. (30 min to understand and re-write(with the words comming from the file that means if there is an error it comes from it) it to make it readable)
While lacking in actual arousal, this story is incredibly great and caught me off guard. The writing is witty but not to the point where your tongue is piercing through your cheek, the story is well fleshed out with enough worldbuilding to add investment to it's characters, and the lore seems to fit right in with the pre-existing fallout universe. I'm only probably halfway through so I can't comment on it all, but I think you have real potential as a writer in the future. Personally, I think if you come to this game looking to jack off you're going in with the wrong mindset. Think of it as a story about sex, not a sex story.
I enjoyed the game. Sure it is not yet finished, and perhaps it would need some rethinking of certain parts, to make it more coherent. But I like the ideas, I liked the introduction part taking longer, and to get into the mood. Also the dreams are nicely done, like some kind of avantgarde poems.
Spoiler Alert: What I would rethink is to add some additional computer logs about the various experiments fertility. In theory the C would implicate a higher fertility rate with less month of pregnancy, but I am not sure that all of the others would have planned to be infertile as it was all about repopulating the wastes, no? Of course they might ended up infertile after all, but would be nice to clear the aims or rsults up on the notes.
I am looking forward the updates anyway.
So I'm in the representative part, and chose not to take jet, but after flirting with either group there is nothing. It's just black. Any reason at all?