You are Matt Mason: a nearly thirty year old supermarket clerk. You're overweight, directionless, and still a virgin.... and your life seems to be going downhill from there.
But now a strangely fortuitous meeting with an old high-school acquaintance seems to be guiding your life down an entirely different path...
Beta 3 (Final Beta) is live!
*This will be the last beta before finished release*
Play online: https://dashingdon.com/daviezwei/NMDB/
Or download: https://dashingdon.com/daviezwei/NMDB/NMDB.zip
Praise for No Money Down Blues:
"Terribly written." -sathirran
"...i'm starting to think a women might be writing this" -TheeSpongeman
(best fuckin' compliment I've ever received by the way)
"...uncomfortably awkward." -Nova25
"...a true shame." -karactr
"I'll say this... you will abandon ship..." -Zer0zero
*disclaimer: reviews may have been taken completely out of context for purposes of humor...
except that first one, that person REALLY hated it.
You find yourself changing in all senses of the word. How will you handle it? Will you seek out the truth, revel in your burgeoning new life, or capitalize on the opportunity?
Pros: Well written. Has a sense of humour.
Cons: All of the characters are insufferable dirtbags. The player is not offered a "I hate you all I'm leaving" option. Eventually, I clicked the close window button, as that's the only "I'm leaving" option the game allows.
I absolutely adore the writing; as someone really into submission, plenty of the scenes actually sent tingles through my body~
Aside from the writing, the presentation is quite pleasant: The little "window" images on the side, the comfortable colors--even the subtle text shadows. My eyes love it!
The story seems like it would be really mundane at first, but playing through it is really enjoyable and it slowly gets pretty interesting. I could see how the player's "role" might not be everyone's cup of tea, but it gets me good and flustered~
If I had to offer some criticism, I'd say the little Appearance, Acquaintances, and Statistics menus didn't get much of my attention. Like, at all. Normally I like checking those out in games, but they seemed sloppy enough to diminish the overall feel of the story if I did check on them. That's minor, though; the rest works well without it anyways.
Overall marvelous, definitely a favorite!
Great work so far, I just wish I could have saved my penis somehow, the denial play with Emily was real nice ;)
I can't get past the unbelievable amount of abuse that the MC is supposed to just accept. I just couldn't get into the story because of it. At what point would he just have to stop and say "WTF? I'm out!"?
The sex scenes were not the best I've read from this site, however the story was fresh and something Id never read before. I'd give it a 4 outta 5.