In this game, you play a random guy going to sleep after a hard day of working. What happens next is up to you.
It's a CYOA style narrative with several endings, made in Twine.
This is my first game, and first ever project using Twine (Sugarcube Format for easy night reading). Feedback is appreciated!
You - The amorphous mass of a human being that's wandering where he shouldn't be.
Brucie - Your supposed "Guide" and first person you meet.
Nesbelli - A kindly older woman of ambiguous, though clearly not human race.
Inari - Anyone who's played Persona 4 probably has a negative idea from the name alone.
The Mimic King - A greedy bastard with a weirdly specific fetish.
Matsa - Older, well-muscled inn-matron.
Igdrial - Just... Yeah.
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Still progressing well. Slow transformation comment from before is fixed.
Still progressing well, but one of the slow transformation seems a bit speedy.
Still progressing well.
Not bad for a new entry! I found the current writing to be good and descriptive, setting the scenes that you find yourself in quite well. Transformation descriptions are alright, but I'm sure that with more work we'll get a better judge of how this game will be in the end.
Played though the game and went though all the active passages, have to say I would like more content with the Naga but will wait with glee for that :3
Very good with the discriptions and intresting story lines! Download and play, you'll have a lot of fun doing so :)
Really enjoyable; a fun romp. Loads of unfinished endings; this looks like an endlessly-branching tree, so there's lots of writing to do. Luckily there's a convenient back button.
Can't wait to see the next update!
I really like what I see so far. I hope there's more content to come. =-)
This is a fun game so far, and I can't wait for more updates.