Hi all :). Had this idea after watching a certain movie and my diseased mind came up with this.
The story is that a father trying to reconnect with his daughter accidentally switches bodies with her.I'm really interested in the progression of the character toward corruption, especially in a gradual way. Some people may be put off by the themes since it's kind of incesty, maybe?
Right now it is just a few pages but I did manage to write the first sex scene which I thought was a good point to post from .
I'm very new to Twine and it needs lots of work so feel free to tell me I'm doing it wrong.
More paths and more sex scenes.
Definitely want to see this completed, pretty good so far.
Keep it up! What you have here is a great starting framework for a game. The themes and ideas you're using are some of my favorites: MtF, Corruption, Bimbo. Great job so far!
Good. Hope for continuation. Incest is nice as a fantasy unfortunaely I remember only one other with the theme implied here - "You're Dead, Try Again" (bus route).
Indeed an interesting idea. For that alone it is worth to try it out. Will have to wait for more content to review it fully.
A good start, well written and interesting idea keep it up