WARNING: This game contains mature content that should not be viewed by anyone less than 18 years of age. Every character with a picture is 18 or older and the age of each character is written in their description.
Link to the latest version of Daydreamer: http://www.tfgamessite.com/phpbb3/viewtopic.php?f=45&t=1456
- Small portion of remaining texts is corrected
- New short part of story - mystery behind Rebecca's strange memory undercovers new and more darker mystery
- Look comments MC gives out while 'Look' is used while possessing a girl has been given to Kahori and Rika
You are an average Japanese middle school student. Running late for the first day of your second year, you take a shortcut through the park, and accidently stumble upon a battle. This is when your ordinary life as you know it changes forever.
You - The nineteen year old nameless main character that lives alone.
Aion - A mysterious being that rules over space and time and thus even over gods and demons.
Hikaru Torisawa - A nineteen year old member of Yggdrasil contracted with the the God known as Balder.
Hiroe Imai - An eighteen year old member of Hellion contracted with the Demon known as Foras.
Inari Matsushima - A nineteen year old member of the Balancers and the user of the sacred treasure known as the Naginata of Tomoe.
Katsuko Taguchi - A twenty-seven year old researcher at Irondale Laboratories and naturally-born esper.
Kiriko Otsuka - An eighteen year old member of Hellion contracted with the Demon known as Shax.
Michie Arita - A neutral eighteen year old contracted with the Goddess known as Demeter.
Natsumi Han - A nineteen year old member of Hellion contracted with the Demon known as Morax.
Shizuka Muso - The twenty-two year old leader of the Balancers in Japan and the user of an unknown sacred treasure.
Suzuko Hidaka - A neutral eighteen year old contracted with the Demon known as Valefar.
Yaeko Iwasaki - The twenty-two year old leader of Yggdrasil in Japan contracted with the God known as Zephyrus.
Rika Umehara - A neutral eighteen year old contracted with the God known as Suijin.
Kahori Yamadera - A neutral eighteen year old artificial esper.
Ema Tagawa - A normal nineteen year old girl and only maid of the Nakasawa family.
Naho Nakasawa - A nineteen year old member of the Balancers, the younger sister of Kaede, and the user of the sacred treasure known as the Staff of Chao.
Kaede Nakasawa - A twenty year old member of the Balancers, the older sister of Naho, and the user of the sacred treasure known as the Crimson Ring.
Noriko Fukuzawa - A twenty year old member of Yggdrasil and the user of the sacred treasure known as the Book of the Dead.
Rebecca Sullivan - A twenty-three year old Irondale mercenary and the user of the sacred treasures known as the Dragon Blades.
Rieko Miyahara - A twenty year old member of Hellion and an artificial esper.
More characters will be added with future game updates.
I...don't think you should be suggesting that anybody ask their parents for permission to play this.
Don't let the name and slight grammatical errors fool you; this game has a lot of interesting stuff going on. Mostly linear like a graphical novel, but not as much graphical and more story. It might be a little difficult to get through some of the sentences but for the most part it's pretty simple to figure out what's going on. As long as the sometimes odd logic of the writer doesn't bother you, it's worth checking out.
There are numerous amounts of spelling mistakes throughout the game.
Overall, the game is very good and is encouraged to continue improve and develop the game.
You often switch from personal perspective (me, I) to 3rd person perspective. (You, you're, etc) Stick with one of those. I say the later, because you want the person reading to be the character, correct?
Consider getting an editor or a proof reader as it's pretty clear English isn't your native language. That's about all I can say right now, the content looks good so far and so does the potential for the future.
I wanted to play this game but when I try to it goves me 4 erroe codes saying non of the bit values are set