Played many a game on this site and other sites and always felt it was missing something or they were too short. So I decided to try to make one myself. OOPS It is not that easy :) So this is my first game (ever) in Twine.
It is not a finished game, so expect some empty passages and possibly some bugs here or there.
Basically I'm uploading to see if this is something people like, or hate, or whatever. So please let me know.
A game centered around a young girl Lizzy who ran away from home as she did not want to make a choice between her mum and dad when they decided to split up.
She ended up in Amsterdam, a city with a lot of opportunites, but not per se for a young girl.
It is up to you to guide her through all the influences of the city and stop the corruption of a young girl.... or not :)
It is a large file with many .webm files in it and some .jpg files.
This is currently version 0.8.5.3 - I just call it that way to keep track of development really.
Game is updated; 28/07/2018 with Version 0.8.5.3 Fixes gym bug..... again!
You need 2 (TWO) different files now:
1 - The most up to date html file (currently V0.8.5.3)
2 - The MAIN Data file. Called Life Choices - Data File.
The html file goes on top of the Amsterdam folder - not in it! Please READ the install instructions included in the Data file.
Really appreciate all the replies both positive and negative; Please check the forum section, the Walkthrough section and the ingame Hints section for any questions. A lot of the questions in the reviews below have already been answered; e.g. makeup can be bought from the Mall, not the general store.
Thanks again for all the feedback so far.
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You've lived all your life in a small village adjacent to The Lake District. You never realy been to a big city as mum and dad told you Liverpool and Manchester were full of dangers.
But a week after you turned 17 you're parents got divorced and you were forced to choose who to live with. There was no right or wrong choice, still whatever choice you wanted to make felt wrong, as if you were cheating on the other parent.
So that is the start and Lizzy ends up in Amsterdam. Will she be able to not fall into the dangerous downward spiral of drugs, sex, prostitution and the like? It is up to you.
You, the player who is trying to kee afloat in the beautiful city of Amsterdam.
Many others, of whom some will try to help you, but most will try to gain something, which usually is money and they need a tool for that.
- Makeup can only be bought from ICI Paris at the mall, Lipstick and Nailpolish can eb bought from the general store as well as ICI Paris.
- Please visit the forums (Link at the left side) as most of the questions you may have will have been answered (likely already several times :)).
- Not all items have a function yet. Check out the ingame hints section for info on most items.
- Morale is the main driver for your pay in each job. the better your morale, the higher your pay. For most jobs addiction is a negative multiplier, meaining it reduces your pay.. for most jobs.
Not really a walkthrough but a list of locations to go to so far and key features :
- Home (duh)
- Beach (90% implemented)
- Mall (75% implemented)
- Club (party time - 85%-ish implemented)
- Spa health resort (can only get rid of addictions here atm; 10%)
- Jobs: Model - 100% done, Librarian 80%, Flowershop 25%, 1 more job available in next version Cleaning
- Park - 95% done
- Town - all events done I believe but needs polishing so 85%
- Park 'work' 90%
- Glory holes can now be found in most toilets (95% done)
- 1 more job!
- Street 'work'
- booths in club
- Dancing Queen
- more cities
Could you please tell when your adding more prerequisites to a scene than the previous version. I really do love making the main character submit to Henry (Have an middle aged and older men fetish) however with each update you seem to add extra things that need to be done. Originally you just had to not pay Henry, then you changed it to slowly submit to him by speaking with bibi. In this update after you speak with bibi you cant find henry anymore unless you find bibi first and thats frustrating. I know the first time you meet her during friday or saturday during the club hours but the second time i have no clue when to find her. Could you add changes on the change logs on things you added and things you must do to previous scenes youve made more in depth. Thank you
Also a little more interracial interractions would be nice. I like the guy from the flower shop but maybe some more interracials with blacks, native indians, middle eastern, asians. Maybe some different scenes with lizzy getting both a male bully or lesbian bully. A male best friend or female best friend. Ya know... getting into depth
Would love to see a pregnancy system where you know who the father is? I really want to get the main character pregnant from Henry and see a reaction and the story from the game if you ended up doing just that. Maybe make a whole new system where if you know who got the main heroine pregnant they could move in, and possiblye help pay bills or have more sexual content from them based off that. Maybe add more males with stories, great game no doubt. Do whatever you want. I can give some advice if you ever out of ideas, but its always your game and its great regardless. Waiting for future updates
(Would love to see a scene where your father or older brother if you have one, comes into the game and you can seduce them into.... the wrong things).
Okay, so heres my problem, the game is excellent except for one thing. It is far to hard for Sex Scenes to initate. It was much easier in 0.7.0 where you could just not pay rent and then let the landowner have you and eventually you would sleep with anyone. But now.... its complicated and takes much time.
The game is excellent though
That would be helpful to have Cheat Version. I just finished the Maid route and it quite good. However, i want other route (Libarian/FlowerShop/Model) for more FAP content but i can't because my reputation is too high. The only way reduce it by visiting Priest at Church only at weekend (too much hassle really).
I don't want start over again as i have everything(lots of money, all household item, jewelry), i already unlock landlord content to reduce rent and hooker content. Took me a while but its worth it.
This games is just plain awesome.
So much content, stuff to do and to find out.
Also to the people that complain about the difficulty or the grind, I recommend you to brush up your HTML Skills.
With a simple Editor you can customize the whole game. I for myselfe just created a "Cheat" section, where i can freely manipulate the stats of the character, including jobskills, daytime and some other stuff.
If the author is allowing me to, I could provide edited versions of the game, to help other people see more of the game, easier.
Just let me know.
new review - version 8.5
I like this game and try out every new version. Thanks to the author!
There are two bugs stnading out in this version - there is no option to leave the pub (and nothing interesting happens in there) and when you get rejected from the flowershop because you were recognized as a porn actress, there is no way to apply for other jobs or to get your job at the studio back.
Thanks for making this game!
Absolutly love this game, but the last update has a lot of missing picture files, looks like you added the old picture archive instead of the new one?
Sending lots of love though, excellent game. Just played the online version, plays much better than the download.