Played many a game on this site and other sites and always felt it was missing something or they were too short. So I decided to try to make one myself. OOPS It is not that easy :) So this is my first game (ever) in Twine.
It is not a finished game, so expect some empty passages and possibly some bugs here or there.
Basically I'm uploading to see if this is something people like, or hate, or whatever. So please let me know.
A game centered around a young girl Lizzy who ran away from home as she did not want to make a choice between her mum and dad when they decided to split up.
She ended up in Amsterdam, a city with a lot of opportunites, but not per se for a young girl.
It is up to you to guide her through all the influences of the city and stop the corruption of a young girl.... or not :)
It is a large file with many .webm files in it and some .jpg files.
This is currently version 7.0 - I just call it that way to keep track of development really - and I am working on version 8 which will have more events, improvements, more gifs etc.
03/01/2016 - V 0.7.2 Small update again to get rid of some small bugs and dead ends. Download this HTML version and the Data pack of V7.
Game is updated; 21/12/2016 with Version 7.0. There were several issues getting this version up. The biggest delay was due to my USB crashing which set me back in time a lot. Was able to recover quite a bit of data, but all vidfiles had gotten a new name from teh recovery tool. I also lost quite a bit of work on the phonesystem. So in order to get it out before Xmas I had to kill it. Still think the update is quite big though.
Hopefully I got all the gamebreaking bugs - there were many after the crash I can tell you - but only one person testing never... well you know.
There are 2 files now:
1 - The html file, made seperately to be able to quickly address bugs
2 - the Data file.
The html file goes on top of the Amsterdam folder - not in it!
Really Appreciate the replies so far; Please checck the forum section, the Walkthrough section and the ingame Hints section for any questions. A lot of the questions in the reviews below have already been answered; Makeup can be bought from the Mall, not the general store.
Thanks again for all the feedback so far.
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You've lived all your life in a small village adjacent to The Lake District. You never realy been to a big city as mum and dad told you Liverpool and Manchester were full of dangers.
But a week after you turned 17 you're parents got divorced and you were forced to choose who to live with. There was no right or wrong choice, still whatever choice you wanted to make felt wrong, as if you were cheating on the other parent.
So that is the start and Lizzy ends up in Amsterdam. Will she be able to not fall into the dangerous downward spiral of drugs, sex, prostitution and the like? It is up to you.
You, the player who is trying to kee afloat in the beautiful city of Amsterdam.
Many others, of whom some will try to help you, but most will try to gain something, which usually is money and they need a tool for that.
- Makeup can only be bought from ICI Paris at the mall, Lipstick and Nailpolish can eb bought from the general store as well as ICI Paris.
- Please visit the forums (Link at the left side) as most of the questions you may have will have been answered (likely already several times :)).
- Not all items have a function yet. Check out the ingame hints section for info on most items.
- Morale is the main driver for your pay in each job. the better your morale, the higher your pay. For most jobs addiction is a negative multiplier, meaining it reduces your pay.. for most jobs.
Not really a walkthrough but a list of locations to go to so far and key features :
- Home (duh)
- Beach (90% implemented)
- Mall (75% implemented)
- Club (party time - 85%-ish implemented)
- Spa health resort (can only get rid of addictions here atm; 10%)
- Jobs: Model - 100% done, Librarian 80%, Flowershop 25%, 1 more job available in next version Cleaning
- Park - 95% done
- Town - all events done I believe but needs polishing so 85%
- Park 'work' 90%
- Glory holes can now be found in most toilets (95% done)
- 1 more job!
- Street 'work'
- booths in club
- Dancing Queen
- more cities
I mean makeup :(
What the hell?
its a good game but you need to short out the money in the modle job I start at a 100 erous then I go down to 7 whats going on? and why dose getting a cab cose EVERY erou you have?
The game is great but I just wanted to mention a pretty game-breaking bug that actually lost me a 2+ hour run because I'd forgotten to save.
If you click on the Hints list and then click on the Version list it sends you into an infinite loop of being unable to play the game.
The game is very good and the story written too but I, in particular, have missed more variety between the days. The photos and videos are changing but do not change the text at all! And this is the bottom line! If between the days in which it is necessary to repeat the tasks something was changed of the text making the protagonist fall more in the whoring would be fantastic. I have also missed scenes and tasks at the bus stop, in the bus, in the sex shop, in the mall and especially some people who come and make me requests like that you show the pussy, open your lips, show me the tits and things for the style. A character that makes the protagonist more submissive.
On the other hand, when the model work is terminated, you couldn´t start with another job? For example in the Library... does not give you choice and continue here having finished the the job of model gives enormous possibilities. An idea... an Hospital? for treatment of STD and several gyno exploration would be possible?
In general the game I like a lot and I look forward to more content. I have loved it and played it every night. A way to fulfill fantasies without degrading yourself in reality. When is a new version? That would make me very happy!
I like where this is going. But not sure, I feel like the Fitness club membership might be totally broken. None of the options even work in the fitness club and it keeps booting me out back to Home all the time.
I especially dislike the fact that the rent arbitrarily goes up constantly, I thought the point of doing the dishes was to pevent that- which is vastly misleading. There should be options to do other tasks to prevent the rents going up like repairing the aircon, plumbing ect for the other apartments (as this would then result in meeting your neighbours beyond the public shower).
The game has a lot of potential but its not balanced in the slightest and suffers from some of the worst grind that you'll find on this site because its arbitrarily pushing the numbers ceiling Its blatant padding the game out. That said it could be a lot worse.
The game gives you a lot of freedom actually all things considered and it does a lot of things that other games haven't properly mastered yet, like having the inventory items actually mean something with regards to progression instead of just being placeholders.
I mean theres fun here. The visuals are fantastic. I just wish it was a bit more polished.